You brought everything I love about short stories to life. The magnified view that touches on so many different themes that still manages to give a bigger perspective of the characters' lives.
The aspect that was masterfully done was how you communicated the palpable tension in the air after an explosion. By not explicitly stating it, it became the elephant in the room.
I teared up by the time I got to the last para. It gave a new perspective on 'Son is the father of the man' but also the child discovering a new facet of his father ties it so well.
I see myself coming back to this gem of a piece often.
I am not crying you are bhaiya
You brought everything I love about short stories to life. The magnified view that touches on so many different themes that still manages to give a bigger perspective of the characters' lives.
The aspect that was masterfully done was how you communicated the palpable tension in the air after an explosion. By not explicitly stating it, it became the elephant in the room.
I teared up by the time I got to the last para. It gave a new perspective on 'Son is the father of the man' but also the child discovering a new facet of his father ties it so well.
I see myself coming back to this gem of a piece often.
Beautiful….😍….I suddenly want to go out and buy flowers 🌺 to pin in my diary
I'll bring you a small bouquet when we next meet. 🤗
It was a perfect Sunday morning read.
Thank you Abhishek, I'm relieved that you liked it. 🤗